This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
Answer:
Focus
Explanation:
to specialize in a subject is to focus and study it.
<h2>Yes, very!</h2>
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It's easy to assume that space exploration is not too important, but in reality, it has a large potential to be. Not to say it isn't right now, it certainly is.
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The universe is shrinking, (more like moving away from our reach) therefore getting the exploration in now is crucial if we really want to know what's out there.
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Be it aliens or large meteors of ore, now is a prime time to explore the limits, especially with the technology we have today. Like the Hubble telescope tells us, less and less is visible every day, week, month... and that camera has wonderful capabilities.
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Allow me to introduce you to Kurzgesagt, an extremely helpful channel that shares a lot of information.
A related video:
Limits Of Humanity – The Final Border We Will Never Cross
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Of course, if you prefer to not watch Kurzgesagt, it's fine. Have a great day!
~pinetree
Answer:
look at explanation
Explanation:
to add emphasis = furthermore
to summarize = in conclusion
to show time = eventually
to give an example = such as
Hope this helps! If I am wrong or you need help please comment!
