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Each of these revisions is acceptable.....
Add a period after ring and capitalize the first letter of she.
Add a semicolon after ring.
Revise ring to ringing.
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Briefly introduce and explain each visual
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This helps communicate to the audience the purpose behind the visual and why you chose it in the first place.
Yes, the "iron curtain" indeed refers to the imaginary boundary dividing Europe into two separate areas from the end of WWII in 1945 until the end of the Cold War in 1991. These two separate areas are Soviet Union and its satellite states from Western Europe.
It was a dark quiet Halloween night when Celestia screamed. Celestia was a hybrid, a mix of both dragon and human. Her dark blue wings and tail, she had her hair up in two buns with her short ends covering her ears with her bangs shadowing her face. She wore a witch costume that was black, purple and pink with a black hat. Her friend Nikki came running with her ravishingly long white and purple hair in a cute messy bun. She wore an outfit that made her look like a mad scientist with fake blood which looked suspiciously realistic. Wannabe ran in looking like the human form of sans along with Angel, a few feet behind him dressed as a fairy. Nikki looked as if she was trying not to cry. Emery, Nikki’s friend came wearing her police uniform and blue blond hair up in a ponytail, along with Rihannna in her in her outfit from her concert the night before. The light blue costume made her light pink eyes stand out and her fox tail nearly invisible under a big black bow, her hair in two ponytails right behind her fox-like ears. The two stood in horror and took in brutal sight of their friends that were brutally murdered, their faces unrecognizable from the damage. Nikki tried to make out their names with their faces until she recognized who they were. In rage Nikki said, “I’m going to find the person who did this and make them pay!”. Nikki was furious as she left the room unable to look back at her friend lying there dead. Rihanna seemed to be quite confused and said to Celestia, “Kind of convenient that YOU found him like this, don’t you think?”. Rihanna and Celestia never seemed to like each other and they always got into fights. In rage Celestia said, “I can’t even handle blood and that’s my friend, why would I hurt him!”. Celestia was furious at the thought that Rihanna had the audacity to pin the crime on her. “You found him like this, that is very suspicious!”, said Rihanna darting looks at Celestia. “I do hate to say, but Nikki could have done it, the fake blood on her costume looked way too realistic...”, Angel said her voice trembling, the thought of accusing her friend made her nauseous. Angel not being one of the suspects had said before that she’ll never be able to kill someone and get away with it, she’d eventually end up admitting she did it. Nikki returned with a completely different costume, her Sara Sanderson custom to be exact. “Why have you changed costumes Nikki?”, Angel asked keeping in mind that there was what looked like blood on her previous costume. “Why would I choose to wear only one costume, if that was the case I should have wore a cosplay costume instead. We need to figure out who did this!” Nikki answered. Although it was true, Nikki never did stick to one costumes, she always wore at least ten outfits a day, so today would be no different. Emery passed a glare at Nikki, she isn’t believing her story. “Seems pretty convenient that she had changed costumes so soon?, Emery said. Emery thinks that Nikki is hiding something. “Let’s do this Danganronpa style!”, Angel shouted, she has always thought that the class trials on that anime and in the game was pretty cool. Everyone got to a podium and glared at one another. “I was passing out candy to the trick-or-treaters”, Rihanna said while turning her head to Celestia to her left. “I was in the bathroom”, Celestia said, nobody seemed to question her. “I was fixing my fursuit, one of the ears fell off”, said Nikki holding the tail to her fursuit in her hand. “I was outside, sitting on the porch”, said Emery pointing to the door. “I’m not smart enough to pull off something like this, you guys know that”, Angel honestly stated, she honestly wasn’t the brightest one out of the group. “I was in the kitchen when I heard someone scream for help”, Wannabe said solemnly.
Quite a hectic story I must say , but I hope you appreciate that i fixed some of the sentences and edited the essay.
