Answer:
This is really good!!
Explanation:
I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
The theme of The King’s Magic Drum, is to always be honest. You can be rewarded by telling the truth instead of lying.
Answer:
(C) Problem-Solution I believe. I hope this helps.
Explanation:
Answer:
11 :
Buddy attempts to drive away, however the vehicle chugs and passes on. The driver requests that Bud bring down the window so they can talk. Since he is a conscious young fellow, Bud goes along.
12:
After breakfast, Bud and Lefty Lewis get in the vehicle to make a beeline for Grand Rapids. Abruptly, Bud says somebody took the container of blood, however Lefty reveals to him that while he was profoundly snoozing, they dropped it off at the clinic.On away, they get pulled over by a squad car.
13:
Bud reveals to Calloway his mother is dead, and Jimmy attempts to see whether Bud has any family or on the off chance that he is from a shelter. Bud answers indirectly with the goal that they will not send him back to the Home. Sort of baffled with Bud's answers, Jimmy sends him away so the band can talk.
Explanation:
The statement that best exemplifies a strong persuasive claim is the last one - School communications should be sent electronically to conserve paper.
In this sentence, you have your claim that you want to prove, as well as the reason why your claim is correct. The other options are just facts, they are not sentences you would use in order to persuade someone to believe or do something.
