(Eliot 75)
When it comes to parenthetical citations, I am going to assume that you are using MLA guidelines. If so, it is only necessary to cite the author's last name, followed by the page number, with no parentheses between them. The last choice is the only one that just gives the last name, so it is correct.
Okay, here’s what I’ll do for you. I’ll answer your questions in a few words, and I want you to make sure the answers are longer than the ones I give you. 1) This paragraph does not flow at all. 2) The rhythm is very choppy. 3) The most important ideas are when she moves to the West Coast because it gives more detail on her life. The least important is her childhood and how she is brought up because it hardly talks about it. 4) The ideas aren’t well connected because it just states facts and doesn’t expand on them. 5) The relationship is basically what ever happened next in her life, no detail. 6) I would add more detail and make the sentences less choppy. This should help you rewrite the paragraph.
Answer:
D
Explanation:
The reason that D is the correct answer is because it directly supports and gives some more information about the topic sentence. For example, Option A only gives a statistic for an entirely different topic - it doesn't have anything to do with gathering the recipe materials. Option B talks about making an omelet, however, the topic sentence does not talk about making omelets. Lastly, C is not the right answer because it says the word "Finally" which means that it is a concluding sentence and the concluding sentence does not develop a topic sentence. Therefore, D is the correct option.
First one is stared at, the second is could not think of, and the third is was creating
C. The word I needs to be changed to me. When you have an object of preposition, it is in the objective case. Objective case of the word “I” is “me.” Thus, it should be “me.” hope it helps!
