For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
so probably you didnt ask anything...
It was an additional act of revenge.
C.bad relative told him not ot buy the vineyard and lost it at the end.
<em>basically im is used for not and here impossible means that anything which is not possible .. here main root or word is Possible because im is only a prefix .. this prefix 'im' changes the meaning of possible and makes it impossible :)</em>
