A. the decreasing gap between the rich
and the poor
Paragraph 1.
"Oh!," said Goldilocks, "the controlling idea is too vague. As a reader, I can't tell what your essay will really be about. When writing a controlling idea you want to be specific."
Paragraph 2.
"Oh my," exclaimed Goldilocks. "This controlling idea is too wordy. A controlling idea should be clear and concise. That was I will know what your essay is about."
Paragraph 3.
"Well, well," Goldilocks said. "this controlling idea doesn't address the prompt. When you look at what it is asking you to write, don't you see how it is asking you to explain the importance? This just says it is is important. But I do like how you thought of another word that means to not give up!"
Answer:
1.Summary of the centipede of Ronny Diaz
2.The story was about a misunderstanding between Eddie and his sister Delia
3.The conflict of between the two started when Delia provoke her brother Eddie by way of attacking and destroying Eddie's pet and other Eddie's Important things in life
"Cyber bullying is something horrible thing people do for fun. How horrible? Well, cyber bullies will go online and target people, and make fun of them with absolutely no concern of the targets feelings. But with it being online you can help the target by telling the bully to back off, or block them. and if you have the power, ban them. Cyber bullying has a bad effect on everyone so if you see them tell someone."
Im not to sure, Hope this helps
