Answer:
If the assignment is about your favorite place to get away then I think it's pretty good. I would possibly add a little bit as to why its your favorite place to get away to think.
After <em>living room </em>and before <em>It is important</em>... you need a period.
Capitalize your i's
B
Explanation:
I think D is the answer
Is there like a passage you're supposed to read because I'm not really understanding this question.
I'd go with choice A..
