A) What voice am I writing in? It is drafting because this shows how writer conveys his message through his ideas and thoughts which the writer composes both the introduction and the conclusion.
B) Are my sentence boundaries identified directly with no fragments or run ons? It is editing because it is the process of checking for errors. The process is really important because the writer himself has to be able to identify his own mistakes.
C) Have I kept my voice and tense the same throughout? It will be revising when the writer makes amendments to his message in draft.
D ) What is my purpose? It is the process of planning or brainstorming.
E) What is my evidence ( and where will I get it)? It is a pre-writing. Pre-writing is the very-first stage of writing process and it is followed by drafting, revision and editing.
In summary, the writing process chronologically consists of: pre-writing, planning, drafting, revision, editing,
The point of view of a snow goose is very high up in the air if it is flying.
Here is an example of a rewritten response:
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"While she was running around the building, the bushes nearly blocked her way."
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Answer:
this is what i would say, I've read this b4 and had a question similar
Explanation:
One way I would describe dictatorship in the story is when the man was using his power to hurt Nina when she kept saying that she doesn’t know where the general is. They beat her up badly, and didn’t let her go to her son, even when she implored* that he was going to die. She had no way to escape especially since she was feeble*. This person, is a barbarous* and egocentric* person that only cares about his power, and that tries his best to get what he wants and not in a good way,: “Well if you won’t answer we’ll make you crush some quicklime and see if that reminds you which way the general went!...One of the men guarding the door pushed her roughly to the ground; another gave her a kick which laid her flat...At twenty to five they left her lying unconscious on the ground….“Oh my son is dying! Oh my son is dying! Oh my life, my little one, my life! For God’s sake come! Open up, for God’s sake, open the door! My son is dying! Holy Virgin! Blessed Saint Anthony! Jesus of Saint Catherine!”. This conveys that this dictatorship shown here in the text is cruel and he doesn't care what type of person he beats up, he tries his best to get what he wants even if it means hurting people and killing them.
1*= begged
2*= week
3*= exceedingly brutal
4*= selfish; only cares about himslef
i really hope that this helped :D