In sentence 3. It should be
Discouraged by this, Loraine walked four blocks to a coffee shop.
<u>To make a ring from scratch, you join shaped wire material into a loop using soldering. Then, you round out the loop to a perfect ring shape that is ready to wear. You will need to know a number of techniques to measure, cut, prepare, solder and form your metal material to become a ring.</u>
<span>A) Here is what my mother said to me, at least once: "Jerry, you've got to try a little harder."
Since the quotation from his mother is set off from the rest of the sentence, not continuing it, a colon is appropriate. Additionally, the comma before "at least once" is correct and after "Jerry" is also correct. </span>
There was a loud knock on the door, my parents were home. I didn’t know why they were home but they came. I opened the door in shock and asked them why they were home so early. They said we can home early because we have a surprise. I said really, a surprise? They said yes we are going to a different state for a few weeks. I was so ready and excited to go. I couldn’t wait, when are we leaving I asked, they said tomorrow. Ok I’ll go pack now then.
This helped him by being able to interact with his family.
I know this might be short and boring, it should work though, let me know if you have any questions and make sure to check for spelling errors and punctuation errors. Hope this is helpful, have a great day.
