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The correct answer is The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.
Explanation:
In this passage, the narrator describes experiences related to the creation of a community garden. In sentence 5, the author describes what seems to be the beginning of community garden "I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up..."; however, this sentence does not show the relationship between this event and the events previously described.
In this context, it is necessary to add a time relationship or at least a connector that shows how Been acting strangely led to him began working to create a garden. According to this, the best option is "The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt..." because this clearly shows this last event occurred after Ben decided the dirt lot was a perfect place to create a community garden.
Answer:
b. taking out an awkward phrase
Explanation:
Option B is an example of local revision.
Local revision is known to deal more with sentence-level revision. In this type, words are changed in order to make a sentence clearer, grammatical or spelling errors are correcting, awkward phrases or clauses are removed, etc.
Another type of revision is global revision. This type focuses on the big picture of the whole work; the ideas, audience, analysis, organization, etc.
Allyn & Bacon Guide to Writing Concise Edition stated, ""You revise locally whenever you make changes to a text that affect only the one or two sentences that you are currently working on. In contrast, you revise globally when a change in one part of your draft drives changes in other parts of the draft"
Therefore, Option B is the correct answer.
After a thorough research, there exists the same question that has the following line and choices.
<span>"I served them well/with my noble blade, as was only fitting. /Small pleasure they had in such a sword-feast/dark things in the sea that meant to eat me."
</span>A. conflict
B. Kenning
<span>C. Falling action </span>
<span>D. Resolution
</span>
The correct answer is letter B. Kenning. Kenning is a type of circumlocution. Its form is compounded and shows figurative language in substitute of a concrete single-word noun.
