Answer: Yes, it just needs more body!
Explanation: I like the plot line, if you add more excitement to the story via adventures then I’d say you have a nice book going!
Answer:
Ill try my best to answer this <3
Explanation:
-Four teens going to investigate a crime scene somewhere and they end up getting m*rdered
-A ran down school getting visited for the first time in years, As you try looking at the old classrooms theres some kind of demon thing
Like i said i tried my best, I really hope this helps :)