Instead of "his, " use "its"
Im not sure though
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the wealth that Gatsby believes will enable him to win Daisy back from Tom
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As a reader, we can infer that this dreamlike state happens when something scares Max, he feels uncomfortable, or he feels stressed.
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We cannot do this for you, Its interactive and you did not provide the sentences. Plus the way you worded what u wrote is quite confusing.
Significantly shorter than stories :)