-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
1. The children were doing their homework when their father came back from the office.
2. He was playing the guitar when someone opened the window and threw out a bucket of water.
The Answer is B. I already heard the news about Jamie and Alex: they are going to have a baby.
Answer:
18,098 square noodles
Explanation:
brai+mx18=18,098
hellokitys+crack=square noodles
hope this helped :))
Answer:
Hewo Asuna here
You should be able to go past 120 words
One time I had to write a 300 word essay and I did 500 and they accepted it I also got a A
Explanation:
Hope this helps
Also they could give you extra credit for extra words