Answer:
Cheesy adjectives and add many many unnecessarily fluffy descriptions
Explanation:
All you need to do is maybe replace "felt happy" with "her heart pounded with happiness"/"walked down the school hallway" to "excitedly waltzed down the hallway and into the basking rays of the radiant sun" or something of the such and some dialogue lines in between Denise and her mom.
I think you'll be fine for vivid descriptions and strong imagery as long as you elaborate on Denise's feelings a bit more. I'll give you some bits you can use: "a warm smile", "stomach fluttered", "'I'm proud of the results of my hard work!'"
Anything cheesy should be perfectly enough to satisfy your teacher.
(Apologies that I have not given you a paragraph to copy-paste. Hopefully these pointers can guide you a bit :))
2. Sheera decide to stay home when shandra gets tickets to the book release because her grandmother asked her what about the beans and she loves her grandmother and didn't want to let her down.
3.yes, Sheera likes to spend time with her grandmother.
1 example- Grandmother asked me to help her organize a yard sale for the lewises, who lived around the corner.
2 example- Grandmother walked over and gave me a quick hug. "I knew you could do it" she said
4.Sheera started feeling like the levving practice became more of a partnership when her grandmother retired from levving and started showing sheera how to get better at it.
They were protecting Europe from Hitler.
If you have choices I can choose one
Answer:
The answer is C.
Explanation:
By the mother coming to school and the some kids mock her hairstyle, it reinforces the what the narrator thinks while also hurting the mothers feelings making the situation worse
The word thoughtless provides a clue to the meaning of insensitive because the defenition of insensitive means showing no feeling or concern about anyones feelings