Sure!
Beautiful name by the way.
Red Chief should stay with Bill and Sam because:
The men handed over the money and the boy – who had actually been happier being away from his super strict father and therefore does not want to be returned to his father.
^He obviously doesn't want to be near his father, as Bill and Sam were more lenient and let him play around.
Sorry I couldn't come up with more, I didn't really read the story that much, again, my apologies.
Toodles~
I am pretty sure that the answer is sad and listless i am pretty sure
hope this helps (;
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what was your story about then i can help
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break it into parts, and focus on a little at a time. planning out each paragraph (like its contents) will help alot with the structure. Make sure to use transistion words and correct grammer. Also make sure it doesnt repeat too much. (and use double space) (The font Nimbus Roman makes ur essay look longer and doesnt differ much from regular times new roman) (looks over ur ruberic a few times before u turn it in, and make sure to read it outloud)
hope this helps!
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