I think the best answer is B. Revising means refining a piece by eliminating errors and improving clarity, while editing means improving the overall quality of a piece by changing parts of it.
For indicating time, the best answer is C- During, because this word tells a reader when an action is taking place.
Again implies that something has been done before, and is being done again, but does not imply <em>when</em> it is being re-done.
Furthermore is a word with a similar meaning to "Also", so it is not connected to the idea of time.
Besides generally means "other than" which, again, has no connection to time.
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