Question

This story is about a man who is good natured, friendly, and treats others with kindness. which most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence? this story is about a good-natured, friendly, and treating others with kindness man. this story is about a good-natured, friendly man, and he treats others with kindness. this story is about a man who is good natured, friendly, and kind to others. this story is about a man who is good natured to other people, friendly, and treats others with kindness.

Answer 1

This story is about a man who is good natured, friendly, and kind to others.

Answer 2

Answer:

This story is about a man who is good natured, friendly, and kind to others.

Explanation:

Parallelism is the pattern of form of writing prose or poetry in such a way that all forms like the grammatical structure, form, sound, meaning and even the pattern of the words are corresponding to one another. This use of parallelism presents an image or picture of a carefully grafted group of words which seem to cohere to one another.

The given sentence talks about a man who is good natures, friendly and kind. The only problem with it is how the words are positioned. So, the correct way of restructuring the sentence in such a way that the parallelism is right will be-

This story is about a man who is good natured, friendly, and kind to others.