You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. Only one student will be awarded the schola
rship. You have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your life that significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. Apply narrative techniques, a solid prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants. For mine, I chose to write about the birth of my brother when I was three years old. Can anyone help me write it? Will mark brainliest to the best answer. Please write the full essay, including sensory details.
I was sitting on the carpet floor, in front of the TV, with crumbs on my cheeks and a half-eaten, chocolate chip cookie in my little hands. A pile of toys surrounded me and nearby my aunt rested in a rocking chair snoring gently, while the clocked ticked by, counting the seconds until my baby brother's birth. At the time, of course, I had no idea there would be another tiny human invading my parents' attention. So there I was awaiting the arrival of my family, not a care in the world, other than sneaking more cookies from the cookie jar. In my toddler mind I knew something special was going to happen, a "surprise", my mother told me as i hugged her before she left that day. I noticed her tummy was very big and there was something moving in it.