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Revised (active voice): Superintendent assumed that the trip had been postponed until the next Thursday.
Revised (active voice): By the 15th of every month, the completed form should be submitted to Tim Hagen.
Revised (active voice): The fluid should be allowed to dry for eight to ten seconds after being applied sparingly.
Revised (active voice): Researches defined the metropolitan area as the countries related by communiting patterns.
•The prolonged beginning, narrated by a first-grader emphasises how big the world is to children.
•The sentences are long, laced with a lot of punctuation which sounds similar to how young children speak.
• the narrator settled into his ‘frustrated six-year-old silence’ and here, it is emphasised how a six year old communicates when angry, through silence. The author almost mocks this, through the use of sibilance. This proves the worlds ambiguity and how much more the child has to grow.
Here’s a few points to mention, hope it helps:) I’m not sure how old you are, so it may or may not be too complex
