Read the paragraph from Sasha’s personal narrative. 1. In 6th grade, I sang in the school choir, and we often traveled to differ
ent places for our performances. 2. I didn’t mind traveling short distances, but I was nervous about going out-of-town. 3. Going out-of-town meant being away from home for a few days. 4. I had never been away from home before. 5. Before the first out-of-town trip, she sat me down and shared her own story about leaving home for the first time. What is needed between sentence 4 and sentence 5? another sentence that introduces the narrator as a character another sentence that makes the time relationship clear another sentence that tells how Sasha felt about going out-of-town another sentence that identifies who “she” is in sentence 5
you need to make the reader more involved with their surroundings so they get more invested and understand the plot development more, they would also maybe form ideas of their own similar to the peoples in the story
