Simile or metaphor if it uses like or as it is a simile
We can see Greek family values based on Penelope who waited for Odysseus for 10 years to come home and did not want to marry any of the suitors. His Son is also always on his side and believes that he'll come back. Even his dog is faithful and is one of the rare Ithacians who recognizes him.
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Explanation:
Its pretty good, I would reccommend that you should change
"The echoes of demise reverberate throughout my ears." to "The echoes of demise reverberate in my ears."
"I have slash open my enemies, " to "I slash open my enemies"
"The scarlet hue of their corpses bows before me, " to "the scarlet hue of their corpses bow before me"
"But darkness’s claw clutches hold of my eyes, " to "But darkness’ claw clutches my eyes, "
"The coldness of the steel penetrates my muscles," to "The steel's coldness penetrates my muscles,"
also I don't really know what the And line is for.