Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
The support of a paragraph is a group of sentences that support the main idea of the paragraph. It tries to iilustrate, and explain the main idea.
Answer:
c. ploy
Explanation:
Henry Mintzberg is an academic and an author of management and business. He belongs to Canada. He believes that skills are gained through experiences and through classroom studies.
Henry Mintzberg in the year 1987, distinguishes a group of five various visions of strategies of an organization. He has given them the name of the "5 P's of Strategy". The 5 Ps stands for Position, Ploy, Plan, Pattern and Perspective. It allows the organization in implementing an effective strategy for the organization.
