I think the answer is individual paragraphs because you break it up so after the whole essay you move to paragraphs than sentences then words then punctuation so that its easier to find errors.
Well, he went from being a happy man with a family to a man who just cared about making money and working and the only guy he treated like family, died. So, therefore he ran the company by him self and he was never home. He was always doing things for work.
You make good money and can support your family but your by rich and you can’t buy everything you want
Say no i didn’t my dog ripped it