This is probably going to be more than 15 lines but...here goes nothing
As I lay on my sunken bed
I hear his voice inside my head
Thinking I should have stayed
This tune I hear repeating in my head
I can’t go back, come here instead
He’s not here, he’s gone back home
The love he’d shown was not for me. And I moved on
My sister was jealous, telling me lies
I knew something was going on , it brought tears to my eyes
As I lay on my sunken bed
—-finish the rest I know it sounds soo bad. ♀️ sorry I tried though
Yes. Instead of a semicolon after Party, end the sentence. The rest is good
After we ate supper, We are going to play a game.
