Dear Naya, I want you to enroll at my school! It's the best of all schools. It provides longer breaks, fun teachers, amazing after-school activities, longer recess, and an science lab! Every Monday, we get rice crispy treats for free! On Tuesday, after lunch, we'll go to the gym and play some awesome activities! On Wednesday, after 4th period, we'll go to the music room and hear a solo and rate it! Lastly, on Thursday, instead of going to school, we get a break! So, that's 3 days of school, and 4 weekends! If you enroll to my school, it'll be fun as a bouncy house!
<em>Sincerely, Lily.</em>
I feel 'while' would be the connecting word here. Without it the sentence flops and it helps add onto it with the extra sentence part.
I sharpened your pencil. You were away.
'While' should be the conjunction.
Answer:
This one, of course: which sentence uses an informal style
Explanation:
It lacks capitalization and punctuation.
