Answer:
good, but the use of satirical techniques needs improvement. The first “good” example does a better job of capturing the satirical tone desired for this assignment. Remember, you can also look to all of the satirical pieces in the SpringBoard book as examples.
Explanation:
(I don't know if i should put it in full sentences so I'm not.)
Line 1- Home
Line 2- Safe, Secure
Line 3- still, active, loving
Line 4- windows, doors, rooms, people
Line 5- moving, playing, talking
Line 6- helpless, protective
Line 7- outside
(I tried. I would have done better if I understood how to do it better. but that's what I came up with. Hope it's good. I am a poet so yeah.)
The answer is A. to win and end the civil war.
