In "Say No to Budget Cuts," Joshua argues that budget cuts will eliminate many services benefiting the community, including the
Children's Story Hour. Which is a piece of relevant evidence in support of Joshua's claim and reasoning?
A: Without Story Hour, the kids will be getting more TV and less literature.
B: The annual circulation of the library is .5 million volumes. That statistic means that the residents of our city borrowed approximately a half million volumes.
C: Over the years, sitting in a circle with many other children, I must have listened to dozens of wonderful stories and poems.
D: I began attending these weekly events even before I was able to read; I was three or four years old, according to my mother.
If you accept either C or D as the correct revision then you have to accept both of them. Hence the best way to treat the sentence is to ignore both of them.
B is not correct either. You can over punctuate.
That leaves A.
Sometimes the right answer to many things is to do nothing. My dad used to say "Don't fix what isn't broke."