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the first one, when it says when we were there, it's missing a comma behind when
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Just then my brother pulled up, so I smiled and waved, not minding the aching muscles in my arm quite so much.
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thank me later
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Hunter asked, "What is going to happen with this crazy weather?".
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I'm assuming you're improving the sentence. commented should be replaced with asked, since he is asking a question. Then you just have to add punctuation to the dialogue.
The groomer had to get 3 big red ribbons out of the dog's matted fur
