<span>I shall have learned what little
there is about greatness.</span>
It would better improve the paragraph because it has nothin to do with the rest of the paragraph. The paragraph seems to be about team sports and promoting it, while sentence 3 is about individual sports are better then team sports. So removing sentence three would better promote CO-ED team sports.
1) she praised for a job well done. 2) he tested. 3) they planned the outing. 4) I was afraid to speak by. 5) I should be satisfied with. 6) we were very proud of after they won in the queen bee. 7)
Answer:
audience and purpose
Explanation:
During the revision process for any piece of writing, a writer looks at his own writing through the eyes of a reader and tries to detect some mistakes in his work that he can correct.
During this stage, the writer focuses on the audience he's writing for and his purpose to see if he is still in line or if he had deviated from his purpose.