31 POINTS [1] Toy poodles get a bad rap. [2] Although a little feisty, they are also exceptionally intelligent. [3] They are sai
d to be one of the most trainable breeds around. [4] And here's something potential dog owners may not know: for their size, toy poodles are excellent guard dogs. [5] One toy poodle actually scared an intruder with it's angry barking. What is the BEST way to improve the sentence fluency in the paragraph? A. Make the tone consistent. B. Combine sentences 3 and 4. C. Vary the beginnings of the sentences. D. Add transition words to some sentences.
By making the tone consistent, it seems like the writer is jumping around less. Using some transition words would really help this paragraph flow, in my opinion. At the moment, the words kind of jump around from place to place, and might confuse the reader.
A primary source is where the information comes directly from the original copy or someone who experienced it first hand, and where as a secondary source is someone or something that was not there when the event took place- hope this helps!!
Modifiers in a sentence should generally be placed as close to the noun, word, or phrase they're intended to modify. Misplaced modifiers can cause confusion (or sometimes a good laugh) when they're placed too far from the noun they're modifying.
