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The most obvious fault of this paragraph is the lack of punctuation marks. The entire paragraph is one sentence, when there are supposed to be periods, commas, and other punctuation marks to separate them. This makes this paragraph one run-on sentence, which is grammatically incorrect.
Some oxegyn is realeased. Carbon then mixes with water making glucose. The carbo in the glucose is then oxidized to carbon dioxide. In fermentation starts after glucose is oxide and it makes glycosis!
