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<span>When the writer describes his experience of reading a magazine article, it is an example of B. anecdotal evidence
Anecdotal evidence is the evidence that rely too much on an individual's experience.
Anecdotal evidence is considered an unreliable evidence because it often do not represent the whole consensus</span>
<span>Lu Han (born April 20, 1990), is a Chinese singer and actor who was a former member of the South Korean-Chinese boy band EXO, and its subgroup EXO-M. He is signed to S.M. Entertainment in South Korea and Avex Trax in Japan</span>
