Answer:
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Explanation:
It's a plot device, they are commonly used to move the plot of a storyline forward.
I think Glacius too,
Might be wrong, idk
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Which of the following could be described as a key trait? <span>B.Marilyn has blue eyes and red, curly hair.</span><span>
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