I'm pretty sure the first sentence? Everything else sounds a tad opinionated.
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Law self discipline is the theme of the above paragraph.
Phase, in thermodynamics, chemically and physically uniform or homogeneous quantity of matter that can be separated mechanically from a non-homogeneous mixture and that may consist of a single substance or a mixture of substances
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