Hello!
A) the setting is extreme but natural, therefore realistic because places like that can actually exist in the real world. Hope you get it right and sorry for the late answer.
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~ Destiny ^_^
This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
Miserable is an extreme form of being sad.
<span>Exhausted is an extreme form of being tired.</span>
Cause he felt like leaving! DUH!
Just kidding!
William Shakespeare might have left London and stopped writing three years before he died because he had lost his sight, a playwright has suggested!
